Nice poem. A bit non-linear for my tastes.
It seems there's a character limit when "mobile blogging" via text message. As my post was a bit long, Blogger just broke it up and posted them in order (bottom to top). The result was that "disjointed stream of consciousness" sort of beat poetry thing you saw there. Maybe I should turn that imto a prog-rock song ...I cracked up at your comment, though.~cheers!